I wrote comments at this horrible site yesterday and the dude chickened-out. Yet, the jackass promotes his site on alphainventions. This is exactly the kind of asinine crap I envisioned battling w/ combatwords. Well if chickenmeister is going to hide the comments on his blog, I'm just going to have to post them here, so everybody can see how chicken he is.
He wants an audience, so he treasures his honor, but he won't fight for it? Cannedcombat should do one on empty vanity next. Anyhow, here's the thread:
"9 Responses to “Moments”
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Lily Saurez Says:
March 24, 2010 at 7:39 pm
I really enjoyed this. Thank you.
-LS
http://lilysaurez.wordpress.com
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Justin Says:
March 24, 2010 at 7:41 pm
The pleasure is all mine :)
Thank you for reading!
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william Says:
March 24, 2010 at 8:37 pm
howdy Justin william here from the rally, loved this, u are a good writer, please pop over and read one of mine, hope to become friends :)
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Justin Says:
March 24, 2010 at 8:40 pm
Thank you very much, William :)
Your kind words mean a great deal to me.
I’ll surely be reading your work, post haste ^_^
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Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 11 (March 24-30, 2010) « Jingle Says:
March 24, 2010 at 9:23 pm
[...] http://jmblackstock.wordpress.com/2010/03/24/moments/ [...]
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Khakjaan Wessington Says: Your comment is awaiting moderation.
March 25, 2010 at 2:27 am
Repeats itself again and again. What’s the point? You’ve committed a felony against the muses.
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Khakjaan Wessington Says: Your comment is awaiting moderation.
March 25, 2010 at 2:29 am
And are you going to be chicken and delete that comment? I think if you want to defend your ‘honor’ you should draw your keyboard and meet me at dawn. Combatwords.blogspot.com would be an obvious choice, but if you’re afraid to duel in a place that allows backlinks, I understand. Cowardice is a common trait.
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suzicate Says:
March 25, 2010 at 6:30 am
“just time enough to breath:
: – my favorite line. This is a beautiful poem. I like it a lot.
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mairmusic Says:
March 25, 2010 at 7:24 am
Your words have a sense of urgency yet pulling back– perfect for conveying this feeling. And we do all feel like this; writing is such a help.
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justmeshakira Says:
March 25, 2010 at 7:47 am
I really enjoyed this , excellent poem, love your moments, so tender and lingering. hugs, shakira
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dustus Says:
March 25, 2010 at 7:47 am
Enjoyed, especially…
“For one brief moment
Let me stop all of it
Let me put it aside and
Try to remember how to smile”
Definitely can relate to this poem. Nice work
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Khakjaan Wessington Says: Your comment is awaiting moderation.
March 25, 2010 at 4:22 pm
Someone’s chicken! I knew it. Couldn’t take the truth?
Repeat: you repeat yourself (heh) and end in the same place you started. Each stanza is anchored with a cliche or just redundant. Oh, you think you’re so clever in ’stretching out the moment’ when all you do is add static to the poetic discourse.
CC: Combatwords : Challenge: rewrite this horrible poem. Try to stay as ‘true’ to the intention of the ‘poet’ as possible. Try to only use the vocab that appears in the poem.
ps: I saw you checked out toylit–what, afraid to throw down? You want to promote via alphainventions, but you don’t want the negative attention?
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